Disclaimer! This is not my view and don’t think this road should go ahead this was just a social studies project
Wednesday, 18 October 2017
Proposed Hollyford/Haast Road
This road will make money like a person breathing the air we need this! Well get more tourists and more tourists mean money, the environment can handle it. It may be 2 billion dollars but the quicker we make it the more tourists will come and view it. And if we charge them the money we’ll get 2 billion dollars back in no time! It’s an investment we must make also if we make a road the elderly it! this project it definitely needed!
Disclaimer! This is not my view and don’t think this road should go ahead this was just a social studies project
Disclaimer! This is not my view and don’t think this road should go ahead this was just a social studies project
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Hi, I am Bridget and am wanting to make a few online friends. your blog is like how you say things about yourself and commenting helps attract people to your blog. so leave a good comment and I might come to your blog!
1. Introduce yourself, tell me something interesting about you
2. Give me some feedback and be specific!
3. Tell me a joke and make a connection, it's your comment so own it.
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Bridget
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hi killer Bridget LOL i like this but it has not got much information in it u might want to sit some where quieter and get more work done but this is cool and it is good how at the bottom that u told them that this is not what u really want
ReplyDeleteHi Bridget. I think your point about the elderly being able to use it is a good one. Fiordland is quite hard to access and many elderly people would be currently unable to view it. Putting a road through would open it up to anybody with a vehicle. If you were debating this topic this point might make a powerful part of the argument for the road.
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Mr McAulay
Hi Bridget
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!
Wow this is some great persuasive writing! Very convincing even though it is not something you agree with. That must have been very hard to do?
I like that you thought about the elderly people in your argument, it is very caring of you!
Hopefully I may get to see some more great writing from you like this if you want to keep working on your literacy skills over the summer!
If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can follow this link: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/
Here is also a link to the weekly activities:
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Remember each activity is worth points so make sure once you’ve finished an activity post it up on your blog so we can add it to your total!
Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!
Ellee :)