Winno and Minner

Winno

I plan my writing using a variety of methods depending on purpose       e.g., flow charts, graphic organisers or brainstorms.

Minner

I am going to use a storyboard

    Winno and Minner

Hello my name is Winno and this in my annoying, silly, way too smart, little brother Minner he knows everything. We are from linger plamet if you thinking I made a spelling mistake I didn’t I’m really from linger plamet. So our parents are on vaccine in a country called New Zealand I have no idea what kind of place it is so don’t ask...

“BROTHER WHEN IS TEA I NEED IT NOW!”shouts Minner [that’s my brother he’s a big eater] “REMEMBER WE ARE GOING OUT FOR TEA” I shout back

“WELL LET’S GET IN BETTY NOW!”he shouts again

“OK THEN GET IN HER”I shout back, do you know how hard it is to shout for a while it’s not great for your throat. You won’t know who betty is will you, I thought so well Betty is our hover car, fits two people, it’s a she, and she’s a bright orange. So we get in and drive to Holocaust eaters it's a great place and it’s SUPER CHEAP believe me I chose it just because my brother is a huge eater. So yeah we ate until it was ten o’clock at night and then I said to Minner

“look we better go home now bro ok or we will never get up in the morning” and then the big BANG! “Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww please my tummy is only half full”he whines

“no, come on we need sleep now get into betty or else” I snap angrily.

So we get in and hover home then we go straight to bed. When I wake up, I go down stairs, on my way past the table I see a paper plane coming towards the house, so I go outside and grab the note it says: Please help me I went out to grab some more food and got kidnapped by lord interrater and now I’ll be locked up please rescue me I only have thirty-second to write it so please rescue me Minner  

“ Oh dear I hope he is still ok well I better set off in betty.” I mutter.

I gear up in armor and grab a sword and jump in betty. So far so good.soon I reach lord Interrateres  bass and put betty in park mode I hop on to the landing board. I see a door so I approach it. It is of course locked, so I bang on the door BANG BANG BANG

“ WHO GOES THERE?? Booms a loud deep voice. I remain silent, then...

“ you don’t know me but I want to talk to your leader” I finally replied.

Then the door opens very very very very very very very very very very slowly Once it opens I rush in. I run up the hallway then there are two paths “ahh”I scream I quickly do a random hand gesture, my hand lands on the left hall so I run into it. What I didn’t know was I took the wrong path and I was going to have to go through a heap of traps to get to minner and rescue him!

Part two will come soon so hang on tight for the next part two saving minner!!